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My fan comic (World's Strangest) FT. Spider-Man, Deadpool, Batman

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You'll notice as you go through the comic that the art and detail significantly begin to improve. At first, I was drawing this to just practice different action poses and then i figured "fuck it, let me make this into a full fledged action comic."

Cover: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/Deadpool-vs-Spider-Man-COVER-379022211?q=gallery%3Aprojectcorndog%2F39334924&qo=0
Variant Cover: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/WORLD-S-STRANGEST-FT-Batman-Deadpool-Spider-Man-440842958

Page 1: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/Deadpool-vs-Spider-Man-pg-1-377791740
Page 2: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/SPIDER-MAN-vs-DEADPOOL-pg-2-378710835?q=gallery%3Aprojectcorndog%2F39334924&qo=1
Page 3: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/SPIDER-MAN-VS-DEADPOOL-PG-3-380928938
Page 4: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/SPIDER-MAN-VS-DEADPOOL-PG-4-382714783?ga_submit_new=10%253A1372891586
Page 5: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/SPIDER-MAN-VS-DEADPOOL-PG-5-A-New-Challenger-389252431
Page 6: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/SPIDER-MAN-VS-DEADPOOL-PG-6-Featuring-Batman-390118593
Page 7: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/WORLD-S-STRANGEST-Pg-7-440812936?ga_submit_new=10%253A1429386563&ga_type=edit&ga_changes=1
Page 8: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/WORLD-S-STRANGEST-Pg-8-FT-Spider-Man-Batman-443886561
Page 9: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/WORLD-S-STRANGEST-Pg-9-Ft-Batman-Spider-Man-445683685
Page 10: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/WORLD-S-STRANGEST-Pg-10-FT-Deadpool-Spider-Man-450241666?ga_submit_new=10%253A1398537820
Page 11: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/Spider-Man-vs-Deadpool-PG-11-World-s-Strangest-527685206
Page 12: http://projectcorndog.deviantart.com/art/Spider-Man-vs-Deadpool-PG-12-530364394

Let me know what you guys think! Thanks
« Last Edit: May 02, 2015, 04:47:40 PM by ProjectCornDog »

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Re: My fan comic (World's Strangest) FT. Spider-Man, Deadpool, Batman
« Reply #1 on: April 28, 2015, 11:06:26 PM »
Looks good man. Would you like some constructive criticism?

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Re: My fan comic (World's Strangest) FT. Spider-Man, Deadpool, Batman
« Reply #2 on: April 29, 2015, 09:56:11 AM »
Looks good man. Would you like some constructive criticism?

Yes please!

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Re: My fan comic (World's Strangest) FT. Spider-Man, Deadpool, Batman
« Reply #3 on: April 29, 2015, 12:09:15 PM »
I think you should try to improve a bit the human figure drawing before diving on the color. Your drawing its pretty good so far but could be better with a bit of work and regular (and boring) practice.

Do you use references? the combination of photos and 3d software like Daz or XPS (freeware) is pretty good for studying posing and proportions. You can even make your customized bodies for reference with Makehuman software (100% free). This is imho the fastest way to improve human body drawing ..unless you have the money to pay rl models to pose :P Don't ever waste your time/money with those wooden dolls.

The other thing I think needs improvement is lightning. I realize it might not be very important for the coloring style you use, but it'll make everything much better. For this again the best and cheapest option is 3d software, complemented with lots of referential photos. 

Overall your sense of composition and narration is pretty good, I like how you resolved some difficult scenes.

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Re: My fan comic (World's Strangest) FT. Spider-Man, Deadpool, Batman
« Reply #4 on: April 29, 2015, 03:39:13 PM »
I think you should try to improve a bit the human figure drawing before diving on the color. Your drawing its pretty good so far but could be better with a bit of work and regular (and boring) practice.

Do you use references? the combination of photos and 3d software like Daz or XPS (freeware) is pretty good for studying posing and proportions. You can even make your customized bodies for reference with Makehuman software (100% free). This is imho the fastest way to improve human body drawing ..unless you have the money to pay rl models to pose :P Don't ever waste your time/money with those wooden dolls.

The other thing I think needs improvement is lightning. I realize it might not be very important for the coloring style you use, but it'll make everything much better. For this again the best and cheapest option is 3d software, complemented with lots of referential photos. 

Overall your sense of composition and narration is pretty good, I like how you resolved some difficult scenes.

Hey man, great advice! I've been actually looking into buying models/statues for the exact reasons you listed. I'll definitely get those programs. Lighting is one thing that is very hard to capture, especially since that's not really what you try and observe in your daily life.

Thanks a lot man!

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Re: My fan comic (World's Strangest) FT. Spider-Man, Deadpool, Batman
« Reply #5 on: June 21, 2015, 02:02:59 PM »